Here's a haiku i wrote for my seniors. The class of 2007.
with love.
with love.
we played
all midsummer games,
soiled and bruised
on the floors
rolling with laughter
and dancing blue.
Life calls.
hush, shush.she mustn't know.
quick,hide.
everything turns yellow.
groping still. i seek.
I spy.
and you became stars
i looked in awe.
a proud kid.
i loved you guys
o archade.love you still.
like gulmohar.
kgp will miss you.
10 comments:
pretty coool !
u think a lot and thats a good sign for a blooger [:)]
hehhe!
thnx be!
for the poem, for being my parpotiya...for everything[:)]
all da best
thanx Daddu.:)
btw, i think so much that I am my pain in the arse. :D
i love you kids...!
for all that we have
laughed
and toiled
and played
longing for the sun to rise above
while merrying in the shade
and wondering....
who were these guys who called them archade?
i long an eternal love from you
but all i fear is
what if my love begins to fade!
this will be a reminder to me of all the love you people gave us..
love you... bachheee..!
n btw.. never knew ki tum itne acche poems bhi likh sakti ho... nice going.... ! :)
love is a gr8 thing.....
thank you so much! :)
makes me realise that its a reminder
for me too. a day well spent.
i'm still not sure if i can write
poems that well. I guess its difficult to judge your own child. :D
u definitely write good, have been saying this for long n its not really tht difficult to judge ur friend...trust me :)
thanx :)
o i meant that poem is my child.
and yes its not that difficult to judge a frnd. ;)
hope my insisting/nagging will make you write for us someday.
cheers
i mean seriously....this is "touching", and not in my joking way :D...keep writing
hw is a poem classified as haiku?
Nikhil-thanx !! :D
Psycho - A typical Japanese Haiku requires the following -
A ). 5, 7 and 5 syllables in three units
B ). Inclusion of a seasonal theme
that hints the season in which
the haiku was composed ( for eg. the word "midsummer"/"when fire flies" in my poem )
C) . When a haiku is cut into two sections,each remain , to a degree , independent of each
other and enrich the understanding
of each other at the same time.
Haikus are primarily unrhyming and contain an element of surprise.
I wrote a free style/international Haikuthat does not follow rule A :D
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